Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kantiema

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Kantiema

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 20:02, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 01:04, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 311 words (48 introduction, 228 body, 35 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 296 words (48 introduction, 217 body, 31 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Comics

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Support

  1. ACvote Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 11:11, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:45, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 19:14, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:04, 7 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Zed
  • I think the events should be presented in a more chronological order, with Sabé rescuing the refugees and her message to Tambor being a ploy being mentioned before the bombing. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 12:44, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Is that satisfactory? Wok142 (talk) 22:15, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • I feel the last sentence of the Description can be worked into the start of History (and History can probably be split into two paragraphs).
  • Could do with a quote in the History section, there are a couple other mentions of the village/its destruction that could be used.
    • Went with the one of Sabe mentioning the refugees there. Wok142 (talk) 00:10, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
  • A couple small details from the comic that I think are also relevant: Sabé mentions the refugees were being held in Imperial custody; also, Tambor asks how many refugees are supposedly there before deciding to destroy the village when he learns there are 12. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 12:54, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Good shout, I've added these details in. Wok142 (talk) 00:10, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Hmm actually, reading the comic again, I'm not sure we can say for certain that the Skakoan refugees ever actually were in Kantiema. We never actually see where those Skakoans with Sabé came from, and the one Skakoan refugee's dialogue doesn't really explicitly indicate either way. Personally, I feel it'd be best to just cover what is known - that Sabé lied to Tambor about Vader and the refugees being in Kantiema, and then Tambor bombed the city with the refugees watching. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 13:08, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
    • I see. How's that then? Wok142 (talk) 22:13, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:04, 7 August 2024 (UTC)