Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kahranna

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Kahranna

• Nominated by: OLIOSTER ^(talk) 22:03, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another refugee.

(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 21:35, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
2. Objections addressed via IRC.—Tommy 9281 Wednesday, May 11, 2011, 23:24 UTC
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:10, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
4. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:50, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:20, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson

• Couldn't you put Brown into the eye color field of the Infobox and the P&t?
• I would briefly mention the Planore situation in the Intro.
• Also, I believe you need to reorganize the Bio a bit. You should mention the Planore situation before you bring up the Jedi Exile, instead of mentioning Planore after the fact like you do now.
• Otherwise, nice job Olio. Finally, a canon outcome that was solidified, unlike some others. :p Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 00:09, April 25, 2011 (UTC)
  • Should all be addressed. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 14:06, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Toprawa

• I'm leaving an objection to these points, even though they're easy sofixits, because they're so basic and elementary there's no reason why this should ever be missed, by the nominator or reviewers. The infobox field for species is not showing up because the field code itself is somehow missing. There should also never be a line break between the end of the infobox code and the quote template. Please revise both instances and please make an effort to pay closer attention to detail in the future. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:38, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 19:17, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
• Across all of your many KOTOR refugee articles, I'm seeing, including this article, four different variations for the presentation of the infobox affiliation field specifying that they are part of the Nar Shaddaa refugees: "Refugee", "Refugee (Nar Shaddaa)", "Nar Shaddaa Refugees", and this article's use of "Nar Shaddaa refugees." Frankly, I don't care which one you choose, but these articles should make an effort to keep some kind of consistent standardization. Please choose one and apply that to each of these articles. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:29, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
  • Went back and made my other related articles consistent with this one. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 18:53, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:10, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:20, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

• The quote for the P&t section say, "I knew I shouldn't of trusted him." Now, the correct phrase is shouldn't have, so could you double check the line in the game. This is a common made error, so it's very possible it's just a mistake on the writer's part. Thanks. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 20:11, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
  • It was have. Fixed. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 23:53, May 5, 2011 (UTC)