Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kadir (Tarisian) (second nomination)

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Kadir (Tarisian)

Nominated by: SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 23:03, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 20:25, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 893 words (82 introduction, 690 body, 121 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 855 words (84 introduction, 674 body, 97 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:KOTOR WP:VG

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Lewisr (talk) 01:37, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
—spookywilloww^talk 19:55, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
His eyes and tunic are BLUE Fan26 (Talk) 07:04, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Zed42 (talk) 09:03, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Objection handled via Discord. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 20:11, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

~~Missing an equipment section (to note Kadir's clothing)~~ Lewisr (talk) 23:26, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Y'know, I felt like I was missing something. :p SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 03:09, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
  - It happens:P Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
~~Per the rest of your KOTOR noms, Revan's pronouns used outside of the BTS will need citing to soemthing other than the game~~ Lewisr (talk) 21:31, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Done. SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 01:03, 21 April 2024 (UTC)

Just the smallest of precedent things. Given that top biography paragraph is 7 sentences, is large enough to be split. Reasoning for that would be that we avoid one-paragraph subsections whenever possible.

~~I personally think it'd look cleaner if you merged the third PT paragraph by placing it at the end/bottom of the first PT paragraph. Optically so that the two look more even in size.~~—spookywilloww^talk 00:24, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- I agree, makes both sections look cleaner. SHCosmos (He/Him ✦ Talk) 18:33, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:11, 10 May 2024 (UTC)