Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kadir (Tarisian)

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Kadir (Tarisian)

• Nominated by: SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 09:31, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Did someone order more KOTOR minor NPC's?

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. The 100% game completion section was one of his more exciting days. Nayayen^(talk) 10:02, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
2. He has an image and everything. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:16, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
3. Heh, love this old geezer…--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
4. Grunny ^(Talk) 11:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
5. Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 21:05, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
6. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:35, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. One thing for you: The sentences in the first paragraph of the bio are very repetitive in structure: "on the latest news, but as he grew older" "of the building, but Kadir claimed" "multiple times, but his requests" "Upper City decent, but was". Could you vary this up a little? Otherwise, great work. Grunny ^(Talk) 11:17, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
   • Mixed it up a little. Thanks for the review, Grunny. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 11:44, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:29, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

• Quote from 70.59.73.30: Kadir rules!!! He is the best character in the game. He talks about the Cantina every five seconds and he begins shouting in the middle of a sentence! I agree. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 09:31, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
• I removed the links to "South Apartments", they redirect to Upper City. Nayayen^(talk) 10:02, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
  • Actually I plan to create that article, after I discuss a few notability issues with Cylka when she's back. That's why I put the link in. I'm afraid I'll forget if I wait for the article to actually go up. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 10:23, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
    • I'd say just go ahead and create the article. Although it's been a long while since I played the game, "South Apartments" seems to be mentioned in enough articles to appear notable. Grunny ^(Talk) 11:17, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
      • I'll get a stub in tomorrow, and expand over the next few days. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 11:43, November 7, 2009 (UTC)