Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kaba Baiz

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Kaba Baiz

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:08, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: While everyone's distracted with Andor…
• Date Archived: 08:47, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 620 words (90 introduction, 461 body, 69 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 620 words (90 introduction, 461 body, 69 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 18:02, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:03, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 23:21, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:03, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
5. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:40, 24 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan26

• The P&T currently describes " four metal piercings lining the bridge of his nose " when its actually two in the bridge and two lining his mouth down towards his chin Fan26 (Talk) 22:24, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
  • This should clarify it. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:17, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Aye, gracías Fan26 (Talk) 18:02, 27 December 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• I'm going to suggest that you spell out "credits" instead of using the symbol for readers unfamiliar with it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:05, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Fair enough, done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:17, 27 December 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• "the Mandalorian fought the Klatooinian workers around him, killing all but one" is Baiz meant to be the one left alive here? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:04, 20 February 2023 (UTC)
  • This was referring to one that appeared to be fleeing the room after Baiz got cut in half. Looking at the scene again, they appear from the side of the crates that the entrance is on, so it appears to be the case that they were one coming to see what was going on from outside. Tweaked accordingly. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:42, 23 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Review note: you seemed to use "though" in the same way as "however" ("the Mandalorian, though, attacked..."), which is not grammatical, so I fixed it in my copy-edit. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:03, 28 December 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:46, 24 February 2023 (UTC)