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K2-B4
- Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 21:46, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: "Kobe!" - me
- Date Archived: 23:13, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 840 words (147 introduction, 531 body, 162 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 677 words (81 introduction, 458 body, 138 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW
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Support
Zed42 
(talk) 20:54, 31 May 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 03:58, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Assuming Mac's objections are addressed —spookywillowwtalk 04:08, 4 June 2024 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:44, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Object
Lew
There are a couple external links that need backing up, and the concept gallery link should be backed up and added to Module:ArchiveAccess/SWLewisr (talk) 01:49, 20 May 2024 (UTC)Coruscant and Ahsoka need contextLewisr (talk) 01:49, 20 May 2024 (UTC)Can Dooku being the Separatist leader be cited to the episode?Lewisr (talk) 01:49, 20 May 2024 (UTC)Currently you categorise K2 with a feminine programming category but this isn't mentioned in the body, also a relevant pronouns category is neededLewisr (talk) 01:49, 20 May 2024 (UTC)Is KB identified by name in the episode? I see in the credits they were, but if not in the episode itself then the BTS should include that they were identified in the creditsLewisr (talk) 01:49, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
Zed
I know the Biography is currently broken up into paragraphs for each episode, but I feel like the first two paragraphs could be split and rearranged somewhat into three slightly-shorter paragraphs instead (I'm thinking that there seems to be natural divisions before "Shortly after the prisoners were brought to Lola Sayu" and after "although they were unsuccessful", although if you find something else that works, then that's fine too.) This would then allow you to have two subsections of two paragraphs, and to add another quote (if possible).K2-B4 being a T-series tactical droid in the infobox and Biography can probably just be referenced to "The Citadel" itself (which would allow you to simplify the references in the first sentence of the Biography if their name can indeed also be referenced to the episode)Zed42 (talk) 08:17, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- I've cleaned it up a bit. I'm realizing that K2-B4's name is said aloud in the episode "Citadel Rescue." Currently in the BTS I have noted that K2-B4 was first identified in the credits for "The Citadel." Should I be noting the first time it was spoken in an episode as well? Wok142 (talk) 23:16, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
I think the detail of the shuttle containing a Republic team should be moved a bit earlier, when the ship is initially introduced. (sidenote, the quote caption in that section could probably also clarify that it's the Republic's shuttle being contacted)Are Sobeck's pronouns specifically used in Counterattack (which the first use of said pronouns is currently cited to)? Otherwise, you'll need to provide another reference for that.Similarly, just to check since I can't recall, is Lola Sayu named and identified as a planet in The Citadel? If not, that'll need to be cited to another episode or elsewhere.Zed42 (talk) 12:18, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Macaroni
I think you can sneak in a mention of how the rescue team tricked the life form scanner."The Republic infiltrators were eventually discovered" <-- can you avoid the passive voice here by briefly mentioning who discovered them?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:21, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
spookly
For an article of this length, I think it'd do well to have the intro buffed out by 1-2 sentences.—spookywillowwtalk 23:37, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:10, 6 June 2024 (UTC)