- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Jhordvar
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:26, March 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Tear him apart!
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
JangFett (Talk) 14:44, March 10, 2014 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:14, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 22:16, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:12, March 19, 2014 (UTC)- Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:22, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Cav
Jhordvar owned a expensive gold-green amaralite ring which was used to identify Jhordvar's skeletal remains, and was later given to Fett as a bonus by Jabba. - skeletal remains implies the whole body, rather than the hands that were taken by Fett. Please change for consistency within the article.- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 10:14, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
- Adressed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:33, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
Jangcerqwdwdf
Per the recent Mofference, you cannot source to individual CSWE entries. Seeing that Jhordvar has his own, you'll need to replace CSWECite with the actual CSWE link in the sources section only. You may use CSWECite as a reference note.- Interesting stuff. Done.
Reload your infobox JangFett (Talk) 14:30, March 10, 2014 (UTC)- Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:41, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
When has "Personality & traits" ever been the accepted title of that section?Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:06, March 15, 2014 (UTC)- I'm not sure if I understand that objection. If you refer to that it reads more like a "Powers and abilities" section, I can split and mention the stuff about the ring and his "arrogance" regarding Boba Fett in a separate P&t section. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:46, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
- Try reading the character Layout Guide again. Pay attention to detail. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:47, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
- Eh, got it. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:27, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
- Try reading the character Layout Guide again. Pay attention to detail. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:47, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
- I'm not sure if I understand that objection. If you refer to that it reads more like a "Powers and abilities" section, I can split and mention the stuff about the ring and his "arrogance" regarding Boba Fett in a separate P&t section. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:46, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
Boba Fett: A New Thread more than likely cannot be used as a source for the 19 BBY date in this article. If you check the A New Threat article, you'll see its date is actually sourced to The Essential Reader's Companion. Please update your referencing in this article as needed for the 19 BBY date.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:45, March 17, 2014 (UTC)- Hm, kinda interesting, I own the German version, where a time-table is included and mentions the 31 months ABG. However, I believe this is not a part of the novel itself, therefore I updated the referencing for both this article and the clone trooper above. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:23, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:29, March 21, 2014 (UTC)
- Is it worth mentioning that he was Fett's first bounty? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:14, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
- He wasn't, Gilramos Libkath was the first and between Libkath and Jhordvar there were several else according to the novel. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:17, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
- Ah I misread first bounties and first bounty in the blog post, my bad. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:39, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
- He wasn't, Gilramos Libkath was the first and between Libkath and Jhordvar there were several else according to the novel. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:17, March 16, 2014 (UTC)