Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jez

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Jez

Minor objections addressed via IRC. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:03, May 9, 2014 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:35, May 28, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:14, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
praguepride ^(Talk) 13:10, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 14:14, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 02:33, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

~~The attribution for the lead quote (The Starcrusher Trap) has no relation to any of the sources the character appears in.~~ - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:06, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
- Perhaps the dumbest error I produced in my career and trust me there were some stupid ones. Fixed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:08, May 7, 2014 (UTC)

Can we clarify what's going on here? I presume after the standoff ended, they had some time to chit chat or whatever? You could qualify this by saying "shared a few words with Jez afterward.": "...and even shared a few words with Jez."
- Not really. They have a few words before/during Skirata's problem solving. However, to add the whole chronology and info on the case would be way too much context. I rephrased the sentence a little bit, have a look. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 07:56, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
I have to wonder how you miss so many instances of double linking in an article that's only three paragraphs long. Keep working at it. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:59, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
- Hm, two things contributed to this. First he was a CAN without intro, so intro and bio got sorta messed up and second the gadget to highlight these links does not work. Still have to keep a closer eye on these on the future. Thanks for review, copy-edit and reminder. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 07:56, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

~~Could there be an article for this standoff?~~ IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:51, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Not really needed IMHO. Nothing happens expect that they are in the barracks and don't want to leave. Before anything could happen, the problem is solved. If you insist, I'll do it of course. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:11, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

~~Mabye mentioning that he was a male in the intro would be good.--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 11:04, June 14, 2014 (UTC)~~
- For clone troopers and commanders, it would be redundant to mention that, since they are all male. He survived the Clone Wars also establishes that. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:23, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
  - ~~Okay i was saying that because, EJ told me that it would be a good idea to say it for my hawkeye. so i taught it would be same here--Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 11:39, June 14, 2014 (UTC)~~
    - Yeah, you can say it, but it is not really necessary. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:59, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
    - ~~kay sorry thenEmperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 14:00, June 14, 2014 (UTC)~~