Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jev Sunrider

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Jev Sunrider

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Support

1. Nominated. Greyman^(Talk) 08:14, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
2. Greyman owns the Sunriders. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 15:57, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
3. --Eyrezer 06:51, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
4. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:18, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
5. ^supergeeky1 \m/ ^{The Cantina} 13:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Object

• His "families' home" appears twice. Is this meant to be his "family's home"? Or did he have multiple families in the same home? Also, is there an appropriate picture of Andur that could be added to the body of the article? --Eyrezer 05:42, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
  • The home was shared by Jev, and then his son and Andur. If you think it needs changing, I have no problem with it. Unfortunately there are no pictures of Andur as a young boy, and placing a picture of him as an adult later in the article, in the few sentences about him, I think would make the article look funny. Greyman^(Talk) 12:50, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
    • I would still regard his grandson as part of his family. When I saw families' home I thought he had two wives with two separate families etc - I exaggerate but I think family's home is more appropriate. Made the change...--Eyrezer 00:13, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
      • Ok, I see where you're coming from. Thanks for making the changes you had in mind, Ey. Cheers, Greyman^(Talk) 08:00, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

1. Naturally, as part of WP:TOTJ. Greyman^(Talk) 08:14, 3 August 2008 (UTC)