Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jenny (Artorias)

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Jenny (Artorias)

• Nominated by: —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 23:29, January 28, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Well, getting into the Invasion comics has finally inspired me to stop being lazy and write another article. This is my first serious attempt at a character, so let me know if I did anything wrong. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 23:29, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Excellent job. Darth Karika^{Please leave a message after the beep. *boom*} 02:25, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
2. Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:49, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
3. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 22:40, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
4. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 22:10, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 02:04, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
6. Short'n'sweet human =P Xd1358 _Talk 13:48, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
7. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:16, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. The Grand Master
   • A few minor things to which I'm going to object just so that you know to watch out for them in the future:
   • Contextification for Nina and Kaye in the intro.
     • Nina has been contextified. After reconsidering, the intro reference to Kaye was removed altogether, as she's not relevant to the intro.
   • Is there anyway you can mention Finn in the article so that he doesn't have to be linked in the quote? (i.e. was he also a friend of Jenny's? Or you could even mention somewhere that Jenny asked about him)
     • Done.
   • I'm assuming the pot was hit by a Vong weapon, but right now it just sounds like the pot was a bomb of its own, exploding by itself. Please clarify.
     • The comic gives absolutely no indication as to what caused it to explode; it just shows it exploding. It could be a Vong weapon or something related to the much bigger explosion three panels later, but that would be speculation.
   • Also, can we say for sure that her homeworld is Artorias?
     • Removed.
   • Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 21:01, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 22:00, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
2. With the qualifications for being Human currently under debate, I feel compelled to inquire if it's directly stated that she is human. If it isn't, saying so qualifies as speculation. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:41, February 1, 2010 (UTC)
   • Personally, I feel that the duck test is sufficient to call someone Human in the absence of evidence to the contrary, but I've changed it to "humanoid". —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 15:56, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:58, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

• Short and simple at 286 words. There's really nothing else that can be done with the P&T, as she's injured on the same page that she's first introduced on, and she does basically nothing after that except lay there and eventually die. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 23:29, January 28, 2010 (UTC)