- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Jedi Order
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Support
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dmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 21:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC) - --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 21:53, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- - Graestan
(This party's over) 21:55, 13 August 2007 (UTC) - Well-executed, well-referenced; not bad for a GA-level. Though, of course, you've got your work cut out for you if Featured status is the ultimate objective.--Goodwood 22:15, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- I'll help some more now that I'm back. They grow up so fast! Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers!) 17:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
Oppose
- Better, but still ways to go. Prose issues, tense issues, copyedit issues, reference issues, some POV issues, and that's just after a cursory look. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 16:03, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- We're working on it. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:38, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- I've been working on some of the things you pointed out and I think we'll be able to deal with the rest of your objections during the weekend. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:19, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
I hate to do this, but I see a few little spelling errors. (Experience, eventually, etc.) Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet)
22:00, 24 October 2007 (UTC)- If you have already found those "little mistakes", could you please fix them? It's a big article and I can't seem to find them. And my computer says experience and eventually are spelled correctly..... but that could mean that my computer is not as "smart" as I thought it was.... --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:54, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- No worries, I happen to see them on a cursory reading. I had a few moments today over lunch, so I went back in and fixed those that I could find. There might be a couple that slipped through the cracks, but I think the most obvious ones are fixed. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) 18:23, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- No worries, I happen to see them on a cursory reading. I had a few moments today over lunch, so I went back in and fixed those that I could find. There might be a couple that slipped through the cracks, but I think the most obvious ones are fixed. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet)
- If you have already found those "little mistakes", could you please fix them? It's a big article and I can't seem to find them. And my computer says experience and eventually are spelled correctly..... but that could mean that my computer is not as "smart" as I thought it was.... --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 12:54, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
Comments
- Me and Jedimca0 have put a lot of work into this article in the last few weeks, and Graestan has done all the tedious tidying up after us. We recognise that this article has recently failed FA and GA nominations, however, this article is vastly different from the one that was nominated a month ago, and with three different users as the main editors. The article in under new management, so to speak, and although it's not got the comprehensiveness of an FA, we feel it's ready for GA. -- dmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 21:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- My thanks to Acky, Graestan, Jedimca, JMAS, Darth Culator, SoT, Pi, and everyone who's helped get my old pet project this far. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers!) 17:19, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- Slight error. Darth Ruin founded the New Sith Empire, not the Brotherhood of Darkness. QuentinGeorge 09:58, 6 October 2007 (UTC)
- Fixed... I think. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:50, 20 October 2007 (UTC)