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Jay's Padawan lightsaber
- Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
(talk) 17:41, 28 December 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments: WP:Jay
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Support
- WP Jay :P Samonic (Ah, yes. The negotiator.) 08:53, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
- Dentface (talk) 10:02, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:18, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
Pending Ayre's objection below. 1358 (Talk) 17:46, 24 April 2022 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:44, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
Object
Samonic
Good work overall, I have only found one thing. Everything which can be linked should be linked at the first mention. Example is lightsaber. Samonic (Contact) 10:11, 27 January 2022 (UTC)- If you are referring to the introduction, the Manual of Style explicitly forbids linking the bolded parts of the intro. 1358 (Talk) 12:24, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
I'm not referring to that one. Thanks for the heads-up though. Samonic (Ah, yes. The negotiator.) 20:13, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
- Addressed. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 22:31, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
- If you are referring to the introduction, the Manual of Style explicitly forbids linking the bolded parts of the intro. 1358 (Talk) 12:24, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
CC-8
On the CAN I asked if an image that just focuses on the lightsaber while staying within the 400px range could be uploaded, have you checked this out?- I forgot about that for a long time, and once I remembered, I haven’t had a chance. I’ll look tomorrow. — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk)
- Better now? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:39, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
- I forgot about that for a long time, and once I remembered, I haven’t had a chance. I’ll look tomorrow. — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
I don't think lightsabers emitting plasma can be sourced to the episode- What should I source that to? You can see Jay’s active lightsaber at the very opening during Order 66. — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 05:08, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- What I mean is that the episode doesn't tell us that lightsaber blades emit plasma, so another source should just be used for that part Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:15, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- I'm trying to find a source for this, but in the meantime I removed the words "of plasma". -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:44, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
- I'm trying to find a source for this, but in the meantime I removed the words "of plasma". -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
- What I mean is that the episode doesn't tell us that lightsaber blades emit plasma, so another source should just be used for that part Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:15, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- What should I source that to? You can see Jay’s active lightsaber at the very opening during Order 66. — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
Should mention that the Mos Espa arena was on Tatooine- Done — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 03:43, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
The Bts part about Geezer isn't relevant to this article's topic, and the filmmakers intentions will still come across if its removedCommander Code-8 Hello There! 11:09, 8 March 2022 (UTC)- Removed — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 03:43, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- Removed — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
Ecks
Just a question, really: are we using the fact that "Order 66" plays in the background during the battle to place that battle during Order 66 and therefore in 19 BBY? That's what I'm gathering from the ref note, but I just wanted to double-check.1358 (Talk) 19:46, 5 April 2022 (UTC)- Yes, that's correct. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 00:13, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
- I reworded the refnote slightly, please see if it's okay with you. 1358 (Talk) 15:32, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's fine. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 00:18, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's fine. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
- I reworded the refnote slightly, please see if it's okay with you. 1358 (Talk) 15:32, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- Yes, that's correct. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
Erebus
Context for the Clone Wars. If the combatants can't be sourced to anything in Visions, you can source it to either Episode II or III.- Got it. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 00:18, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- Got it. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
Can Tatooine being a planet be sourced to Tatooine Rhapsody? I watched the episode, but found no mention of it.Erebus Chronus (Talk) 01:48, 13 April 2022 (UTC)- I have to admit that the latter objection is probably my doing, but Erebus is right that it needs context and probably another source. 1358 (Talk) 15:34, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- Indeed, it's a valid objection. I fixed it by sourcing A New Hope. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 00:18, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- Indeed, it's a valid objection. I fixed it by sourcing A New Hope. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
- I have to admit that the latter objection is probably my doing, but Erebus is right that it needs context and probably another source. 1358 (Talk) 15:34, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
ThrawnChiss
You have a cite error for Revenge of the Sith-ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 00:31, 24 April 2022 (UTC)- Dealt with during my copy-edit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:53, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 17:50, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
- Dealt with during my copy-edit. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:53, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
I'm not sure you need to give quite so much context on the Clone Wars, mentioning the battle droids especially seems unnecessary since we don't actually even technically know he ever used it against them.Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:53, 24 April 2022 (UTC)- Better? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:00, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
- Better? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:44, 10 May 2022 (UTC)