Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jastus Farr

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Jastus Farr

• Nominated by: Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:20, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A victim of the Jedi Purge. Trying to stay busy…

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Very good'n'clean. Xd1358 _Talk 19:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
2. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 17:00, January 24, 2010 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)
4. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 20:15, January 31, 2010 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 22:59, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. "As they prepared to kill the Dark Lord of the Sith, members of the 501st Legion of stormtroopers..." Perhaps "stormtroopers of the 501st legion instead? Xd1358 _Talk 19:36, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
   • Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:39, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
2. Toprawa's notes:
   • Not really an objection, but I'd like to see you avoiding this rather ridiculous style of obsessive-inclusive pipelinking, like [[Darth/Legends|Darth]] [[Anakin Skywalker/Legends|Vader]] and [[Jedi/Legends|Jedi]] [[Jedi Master/Legends|Master]], for example. It's really just unnecessary. [[AnakinSkywalker|Darth Vader]] and [[Jedi Master/Legends|Jedi Master]] work just fine. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)
     • I'll avoid this in the future. I just feel that these things need to be linked at the first opportunity.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:09, January 27, 2010 (UTC)
3. Why would they prepare for battle? "As Farr and the Jedi prepared for battle…" It's not very clear why they think they're going to be attacked. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 20:15, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
   • Please take a look at it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:04, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
     • You'll need to do a better job of formatting your status articles and nominations than that, Kasra. I'm curious how you failed to notice that you've linked the exact same things two sentences in a row. Please fix. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:53, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
       • I apologize, Tope. I honestly don't know how I missed that. Fixed.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:00, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
         • "Revealed" is reptetive. Also, the exact reason for which Vader was coming isn't very clear. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 18:14, February 2, 2010 (UTC)
           • Please try it.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:53, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:59, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks to Master Jonathan for the copy-edit.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:20, January 15, 2010 (UTC)