Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jan Stakross

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Jan Stakross

• Nominated by: --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Just barely 250 words, but another GAnom for WP:VG.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Cal's not kidding. This is at a precarious 251 words by my count. Be gentle copyediting. :P Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 04:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
2. Master Jonathan — ^{Jedi Council Chambers} _{Tuesday, October 11, 2011, 15:42 UTC}
3. —Tommy 9281 Tuesday, October 11, 2011, 16:13 UTC
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:20, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
6. ~Savage 13:45, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object

From the Council Chambers:

• Is there a reason "Logs" in "Maintenance Logs" is capitalized?
  • The source capitalizes it.
• "but did not mind being adamant when telling them to stop taking the skyhopper to the shipyard." How do we know he "didn't mind" it? Just because someone does something doesn't mean they don't mind it; a police officer may shoot to kill when forced to do so, but certainly would prefer not to have to do so.
  • Fixed.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:47, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Otherwise, nice job. Master Jonathan — ^{Jedi Council Chambers} _{Tuesday, October 11, 2011, 01:42 UTC}
  • Thanks!--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
• One more: the phrase "the other(s)" is now repetitive in the last sentence of the P&T. Please reword. Master Jonathan — ^{Jedi Council Chambers} _{Tuesday, October 11, 2011, 01:50 UTC}
  • Looks like Jugs took care of it in his copy-edit.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:24, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Since it was decided that everything in the TFUII Databank is from the Rise of the Empire era, shouldn't you say that this guy if from that era as well?
  • I actually asked Tope about this before nomming this. The other TFUII Databank noms mentioned the Empire or Rebellion, something to show that it happened during this era. This databank entry does not mention anything that conclusively points to an era.
    • I see, that makes sense.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:00, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
• I think you need to create an article for the being that ignored Jan's warning about taking the Skyhopper to the shipyard. (I known this is ridiculously minor, but it had to be a specific individual, so it deserves an article.)
  • It is rather ambiguous since it doesn't specify who did it, but I'll see what I can do.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
    • New article. Thanks for the review, EJ!--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:03, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
• A little context on mynocks would be nice.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:35, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
  • Not necessary. What is there is sufficient.—Tommy 9281 Tuesday, October 11, 2011, 16:38 UTC
    • Yeah, you're right, sorry about that.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:01, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

• Does it really need an infobox if there's no information in it? <-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 01:28, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
  • I asked Toprawa, and he said that it should still be there.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)