- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Jaffkee
- Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 22:55, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A brave, enthusiastic dude
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Winterz (talk) 20:26, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 14:46, January 8, 2013 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:37, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:09, January 27, 2013 (UTC)- DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 22:35, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
Object
- Winterz
If I'm not mistaken, the "young" and "younger" assessments should not be used unless you're given an age or a birth date. They'll have to go!- Sorry it took so long to get back on this, I'm not sure why I have to remove this. Even if we don't know his exact birthday, its established throughout the conversation that he is a younger officer which directly influences his attitudes, opinions, etc and which all are included in the P&T section. If I remove the younger and young, his character wouldn't make sense. Also, I couldn't find a policy or CT that requires this. If you could clarify where its required, I'll be happy to remove them. Coruscantfan (Talk) 20:04, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- This has more to do with clarity. Instead of "A young", I'd use "In his youth". Also, in the BtS, it wouldn't hurt to explain in reference to who(m?) was he younger. Stake black msg 20:08, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- I don't see a difference between a young and in his youth. Coruscantfan (Talk) 20:22, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Actually I was not aware of those establishments of age, I just thought you assumed his young age through his appearance. Objection stroke. Winterz (talk) 20:25, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Ah, gotcha. Thanks. Coruscantfan (Talk) 20:28, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Actually I was not aware of those establishments of age, I just thought you assumed his young age through his appearance. Objection stroke. Winterz (talk) 20:25, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- I don't see a difference between a young and in his youth. Coruscantfan (Talk) 20:22, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- This has more to do with clarity. Instead of "A young", I'd use "In his youth". Also, in the BtS, it wouldn't hurt to explain in reference to who(m?) was he younger. Stake black msg 20:08, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Sorry it took so long to get back on this, I'm not sure why I have to remove this. Even if we don't know his exact birthday, its established throughout the conversation that he is a younger officer which directly influences his attitudes, opinions, etc and which all are included in the P&T section. If I remove the younger and young, his character wouldn't make sense. Also, I couldn't find a policy or CT that requires this. If you could clarify where its required, I'll be happy to remove them. Coruscantfan (Talk) 20:04, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Regardless of the objection, great work. Winterz (talk) 23:53, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks, I try. :) Coruscantfan (Talk) 20:04, January 6, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:38, January 27, 2013 (UTC)