- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Contents
Isshaddik
- Nominated by: QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 09:00, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A barn-burner nom.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Well written. Plus I contributed a little, way back when. Enochf 09:12, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
General practice is now that page numbers are not included in the CSWECite template when it is in sources, only when it is footnotes. --Eyrezer 11:17, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson(Let's have a chat) 19:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:21, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 18:23, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Kilson
I think you should cut down the last two sentences of the Bio since they don't relate directly to Isshaddik. You can say something along the lines of, "After his death, Dewlannamapia remained aboard Trader's Luck, later befriending a young Corellian boy named Han Solo working for Shrike. However, in 10 BBY, Dewlannamapia sacrificed herself while helping Solo escape from Shrike and pursue his dreams." Or something a long those lines.Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:00, May 1, 2011 (UTC)- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 10:18, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
Toprawa
Even though it is a rough translation, I think the character's name meaning, as mentioned in the BTS, can be noted in the IU portion of the article, while still leaving that OOU explanation in the BTS.Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:43, May 5, 2011 (UTC)- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 21:39, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Addressed. QuiGonJinn
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:23, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
- No quotes. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 09:00, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
- Oh, and I didn't mention Utchakkaloch, because it's not really established that Isshaddik was his father. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 09:00, May 1, 2011 (UTC)