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Isren
- Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 09:29, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Evereni go brrrrrrrrrrrrrr
- Date Archived: 03:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 838 words (170 introduction, 549 body, 119 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 844 words (170 introduction, 552 body, 122 behind the scenes)
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Lewisr (talk) 18:35, 6 September 2024 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:48, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- CometSmudge (talk) 22:50, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 03:33, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 03:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
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Macaroni
Your last Hunting on Ryloth sentence has a touch of present tense.- reread the sentence a bunch of times and don't see it Sanathestarr (talk) 20:29, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
"Legacy" implies that he died, which it doesn't seem we know - I'd retitle that section to something else, maybe "Impact on the Ros"- done Sanathestarr (talk) 20:29, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
"Ro also recalled that Isren told her Evereni meet only in death, and Faer explained that they also meet in the Rystan system" – was this Faer making a joke about Isren's adage? It reads like Faer was being entirely serious and was trying to explain that Evereni meet both in death and in one specific star system, which seems like an odd thing to say.- The interaction goes "He told me Evereni only meet in death." Velya clicked his teeth, amused. “Sometimes we meet in the Rystan system." so I'd assume it's the former, added a word to make that clearer Sanathestarr (talk) 20:29, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
I know Gratton uses any pronouns, but in the interest of the reader I'd stick to one in the bts. On Gratton's page it might make more sense to switch off, but here, where they're not the focus, it reads confusingly.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:50, 19 August 2024 (UTC)- there is already status precedent for this, (Espri, Rad (Evereni), Faers, Xouri family) plus there is a ref specifically for her pronouns even though we usually don't do that, specifically to point to the pronouns he uses. I don't really see a reason not to use all of their pronouns, especially when it's no different than using multiple pronoun sets for IU characters (which there's also status precedent for, like Ailee) Sanathestarr (talk) 20:29, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- I disagree with that precedent as it doesn't make things clear for the reader but I won't press the issue. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:22, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- there is already status precedent for this, (Espri, Rad (Evereni), Faers, Xouri family) plus there is a ref specifically for her pronouns even though we usually don't do that, specifically to point to the pronouns he uses. I don't really see a reason not to use all of their pronouns, especially when it's no different than using multiple pronoun sets for IU characters (which there's also status precedent for, like Ailee) Sanathestarr (talk) 20:29, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Ayrehead
While I fully support alternating pronouns for those that use them, I do think the subject of the sentence still needs to be clear and in the line "She also mentioned that he thinks that" I don't think it is, as I assumed that the "he" refered to Idren here and was confused why the information wasn't in the body. I'd maybe change it to ""She also mentioned thinking" or just "She thought" to make it clearer that it's Gratton's thoughts.Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:05, 24 September 2024 (UTC)- done Sanathestarr (talk) 07:43, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)