Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ire Falk

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Ire Falk

Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:41, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 00:08, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 608 words (122 introduction, 447 body, 39 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 565 words (123 introduction, 403 body, 39 behind the scenes)
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~~Gyndine needs context~~ Lewisr (talk) 01:30, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:30, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
~~I think you can include an image of Beaumont in the legacy section~~ Lewisr (talk) 01:30, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- Added! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:30, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

~~I think a small mention on the ultimate result of the Battle of Endor would be relevant in the bio.~~
- Expanded on the Battle of Endor --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:41, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
  - I actually think what you added now is almost too much; that's three sentences that don't mention Falk at all. A simple sentence about the defeat of the land forces followed by a subsequent total loss of the battle would suffice. Xd1358 ^(Talk) 19:56, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
    - Reworded --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:17, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
~~The last sentence of Legacy contains two clauses that each start with "allowed"; can we get some variation here?~~ Xd1358 ^(Talk) 17:43, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:41, 2 November 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:07, 18 November 2024 (UTC)