Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Incremental-sequence bomb

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Incremental-sequence bomb

  • Nominated by: Trak Nar Ramble on 06:40, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: All good things come in threes and the same goes for explosions!

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Good to see my article come so far, good work Trak!--Talrrivanian JaingHead (Headquarters) 06:51, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote After IRC review. Let's get this barn-burner rolling! Kilson(Let's have a chat) 08:41, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote So this is the "burning of the barns" I have heard so much about. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:39, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Well. My head a'splode. Menkooroo 04:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Tick, tick, boom. Boom, boom, boom. NAYAYEN 23:30, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ow...OW...<thud>--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 12:26, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
  7. Added species IDs, since you used "the Gand" in one place to describe Zuckuss. If you prefer, revert, but drop that designator for Zuckuss so we understand who you mean. ~SavageBOB sig 21:55, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Boom
  • The only thing I can recommend is to establish that Bossk and Zuckuss are aboard the Hound's Tooth a bit earlier on. Currently, the Tooth isn't mentioned until a paragraph after Bossk encounters the decoy Slave I in space and fires upon it, which seems a little confusing if you don't know he's aboard a ship. That's all that I have. An excellent first nom for the barn burner! Menkooroo 04:23, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
    • Rephrased it and moved some links around. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:37, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:50, August 3, 2011 (UTC)