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  • 1 Imperial long-range rocket rifle
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Prepare to be savaged…
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Imperial long-range rocket rifle

  • Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:02, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A pretty badass way of closing out the barn-burner. As a side note, any weapon nominations posted in the next few of days will be accepted as part of the barn-burner, I understand that some things get delayed, and I don't want to discourage anyone's writing.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Rocket man? Rocket Sullustan. ~SavageBOB sig 12:30, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Looks good. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 14:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Smooth. Menkooroo 07:24, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:46, September 21, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:30, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Prepare to be savaged…
  • Judging from the infobox image, shouldn't the opening quote employ an m-dash rather than a comma after "obsolete"?
    • Changed
  • Perhaps mention that it had a scope?
    • Added
  • Perhaps add the author and illustrator of the issue to BTS, since these are the chaps who invented the rocket rifle in question. That's it, good work. ~SavageBOB sig 12:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • Done, thanks for the review Bob. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 03:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:30, September 22, 2011 (UTC)