Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ilyana

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Ilyana

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 01:00, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 07:43, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 742 words (123 introduction, 495 body, 124 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG, WP:NOVELS, WP:PRIDE

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Panther436 (talk) 02:57, 8 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 03:16, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Nice work!—spookywillowwtalk 23:55, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:32, 10 July 2023 (UTC)
  5. Nice work indeed! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:19, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Please combine the death and location into a note in the infobox
  • Star Wars: The Visual Dictionary is a Legends source, do you mean Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary, New Edition instead? Lewisr (talk) 03:17, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Since the book refers to Ilyana as a girl, you can cite her gender to that and then condense the current species/gender note
  • I think it would be better to move the stuff in the second paragraph in legacy from 'as Ilyana wished' to 'or their first kiss' to its own paragraph at the start of the legacy section as currently putting it between 12 and 11 BBY doesn't really make a great deal of sense if she continually wore the necklace for years before that too Lewisr (talk) 16:08, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Is there a suitable quote for the P/T section? Lewisr (talk) 22:53, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • Wasn't Cere a Jedi "Master" at the time of Order 66? She's referred to as a former Jedi "Knight" in the article.
    • Cere is only referred to as a Jedi Master by the time of Survivor. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 13:08, 16 July 2023 (UTC)
      • I don't see anything about that in Fallen Order either, but doesn't this line from Battle Scars confirm she was a former Master at least at the time of the Ilyana mention? "With a Jedi Knight, a Jedi Master, and a witch of Dathomir aboard, alongside the best pilot Cal had ever known and a genius droid, he felt like they were virtually unstoppable." TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:30, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
  • "as retaliation for the machinations of Mother Talzin and fellow Nightsister Asajj Ventress, Separatist leader Count Dooku ordered General Grievous" Can this section be really sourced to the game? Unless I'm missing something (like an optional dialogue), the in-game databank only mentions that the Nightsisters were "destroyed at the behest of a vengeful Count Dooku after Asajj Ventress and her sisters attempted to assassinate him."
    • The only thing that isn't directly stated is about Mother Talzin so I went ahead and sourced that part. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 13:08, 16 July 2023 (UTC)
  • I'm a bit confused about the use of [sic] in the BTS quote. I don't think it is written incorrectly per se, but the interview itself uses square brackets to supply words to make the quotation clearer, which should be kept when transcribing the quote here, in my opinion. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:26, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Restored the quote to its original form from the interview. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 13:08, 16 July 2023 (UTC)
  • (Reviewing note) Per the Manual of Style, articles should avoid "smart" (also known as "typographic" or "curly") apostrophes. They are a bit hard to notice, but I've changed them to regular apostrophes. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:30, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:42, 18 July 2023 (UTC)