Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Iana Percei (second nomination)

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Iana Percei

Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:36, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments: New Republic marshal?
Date Archived: 20:15, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 762 words (115 introduction, 622 body, 25 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(Votes required: 1 AC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 AC votes required to pass.)

~~I reckon its worth mentioning the evacuation in the intro.~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:44, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
- Sure, added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:55, 14 September 2023 (UTC)

~~Nice work on those objections! One last thing from me: Could you briefly mention Percei's reaction to the Children's attack, such as her quote in the intro, unless it refers to another event.~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:23, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
- Added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:55, 14 September 2023 (UTC)

~~The tower guard is notable for a page~~ Lewisr (talk) 20:25, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
- Created. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:57, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
When she speaks with Gella, Iana mentions she is the second Jedi she has met, so it's worth noting at one point she met a Jedi Lewisr (talk) 23:23, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
'I do look forward to a new age for E'ronoh' I think this is also worth noting before she leaves to join the dancing, or in the P&T Lewisr (talk) 23:23, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

I think it's worth specifying that she tried to flee to Eiram but was prevented from doing so by the blockade (in addition to just choosing to stay on E'ronoh in general). We do have 387 BBY as the year the war broke out as well, so it must have been that year or after it.
Might be worth establishing U'ronoh as a mining village upon its first mention, as "…deal with much ambushing as the mines were not yielding well…" comes a bit out of the blue later in the biography.—spookywilloww^talk 17:40, 16 October 2023 (UTC)