Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Horox Ryyder

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Horox Ryyder

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:56, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another one for the TPM 20 year anniversary

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Objections handled via IRC. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:22, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 18:29, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
  3. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:00, August 1, 2019 (UTC)
  4. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 23:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Objection handled via IRC. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 07:38, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • This sentence could be split up I think: "In 32 BBY,[4] he attended a session of the Senate in the Senate Building on the planet Coruscant where Queen Padmé Amidala of the planet Naboo made a plea for the Senate to help her end the invasion of her homeworld by the forces of the Trade Federation.[5]"
  • Does Force Collection use "extremely"? That seems kinda subjective to put in an article: "an extremely high collar". Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 17:28, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • I also think the first sentence of Personality and traits could bulk up the intro a bit. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 17:35, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:38, August 10, 2019 (UTC)