Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Home Planet Party

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Home Planet Party

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 20:54, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: For the barnburner

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:23, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:58, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 05:15, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 10:11, January 12, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:23, January 13, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Winterz (talk) 20:40, January 13, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • Why would Xanatos want to destroy Bandomeer? Clarify.
    • Better?
  • I think you should mention that Xanatos was Qui-Gon's Padawan earlier than you do, to give some background to their interactions. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:49, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
    • There. 501st dogma(talk) 00:19, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • I think that the intro can be expanded a bit more regarding how VeerTa "betrayed" the party; her partnership with Xanatos should ideally get mentioned somehow.
    • That better?
  • "and gain control of the Bandomeer's resources from the off-world corporations that controlled them": something isn't reading very smoothly here with "the Bandomeer's resources"; please check and reword. CC7567 (talk) 20:00, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • Sorry about that, it's fixed now. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 22:34, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
  • One more: does the regarding Xanatos's plot deserve an article? It sounds like it should from the info presented. CC7567 (talk) 23:19, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
    • Created. 501st dogma(talk) 00:28, January 10, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:43, January 14, 2013 (UTC)