Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Holocron of Darth Krayt

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Holocron of Darth Krayt

• Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 05:58, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 20:50, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 387 words (64 introduction, 284 body, 39 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 427 words (70 introduction, 289 body, 68 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Legacy Era, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Comics

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 15:26, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
2. assuming below sorted —spookywilloww^talk 18:16, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 18:25, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
4. CometSmudge (talk) 16:53, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
5. Booply (talk) 20:48, 9 October 2024 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Someone please correct me if need be but I don't think we have a status article that showcases an excerpt in this way—and I think, in terms of aesthetics but also to better engage readers along the way, the article would benefit from splitting the excerpt into three quotes. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 19:06, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
  • We do have some Bodo Baas's Master, Ballad of Cham Syndulla, Order 4, Order 5 Lewisr (talk) 01:37, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
    • It is marginally worth noting that the Excerpt template is broken on mobile and has been for years. Given there's no real solution to that and most readers statistically read the site on mobile, using a quote template would suit better (whether in one or broken up).—spookywilloww^talk 06:35, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
  • that's fair, tbh I have no idea why I did it like that besides the article already having the excerpt there when I started working on it. split it into quotes, if you'd prefer them using different parts of the monologue let me know. Sanathestarr (talk) 05:23, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
• I don't think the intro needs to add "also known as Darth Krayt's holocron," since this is more of a descriptive name rather than a proper compound noun, and currently clutters the text somewhat. I also don't think this specific name needs to be inserted in the first line of the article body and would recommend just letting it appear more organically in the text, if that makes sense. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 17:55, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
  • done Sanathestarr (talk) 06:17, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Brilliant OOM 224 (he/him/they) 18:25, 1 October 2024 (UTC)

Comet

• Since the article is no longer treating "Darth Krayt's holocron" as an actual name for it, I don't think its necessary to include a 1stID for that name or to note it in the BTS. CometSmudge (talk) 19:36, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
  • done Sanathestarr (talk) 06:56, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:50, 9 October 2024 (UTC)