Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hogrum Chalk

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Hogrum Chalk

• Nominated by: Menkooroo 06:22, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Chalk it up to my love of the IK's.

(3 ACs/6 Users/9 Total)

Support

1. OK with me. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:15, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
2. Chalk this one up there with you other excellent IK articles.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:57, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
3. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 19:19, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
4. I love it when Wookieepedians choose to tackle particular subjects. Something of an expert on Fel's Forcelings you are becoming, yes Menkooroo?—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 14:46, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
5. Only one thing that I noticed that I thought I'd bring to your attention: The {{ref}} tags of the infobox. I've fixed it, but be sure to do it in the future. ;) -- 1358 ^(Talk) 14:52, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
6. --TK-299 ^{(Click Here)} 07:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
7. Jinzler 15:13, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
8. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 17:31, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
9. Nice work, and per Tommy. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 17:38, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Trayus

• "When Imperial Knight Azlyn Rae was grievously injured by the Sith Emperor Darth Krayt while battling him on Had Abbadon, she was fitted with life-preserving armor by the mechanic "Bantha" Rawk on Kiffex before returning to the Imperial capital of Bastion; after her arrival at the fortress world, Chalk fitted with her new armor." This sentence is a little tough to get through, just out of virtue of length and the numerous indicators of time. You have a "when", a "while", a "was", a "before", and an "after." See if you can streamline it.
• My only other thing is that the P&T seems to have several phrases lifted directly from the above quote. If you could, can you find some suitable synonyms to use?
• Trayus out. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 06:28, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
  • Good catches. Ch-ch-check it out! Menkooroo 10:24, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:38, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

• Are the infobox references supposed to be small numbers instead of big ones? I have been changing infobox ref numbers to display the smaller one, but I am not sure if this is a must. If they don't need to be, you got my vote :) TK-299 ^{(Click Here)} 11:39, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
  • Yeah, Xd fixed that for me. Can't believe I made that mistake. ^^ Menkooroo 15:12, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
    • Lol, we all miss a few small things like that every once in blue moon, I just wasn't sure if I had been doing things wrong in the infoboxes, so I had to ask. My vote has been updated:) TK-299 ^{(Click Here)} 07:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)