Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hennet Kayn

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Hennet Kayn

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:59, May 15, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Time for a little bit of Deja Vu. It was discovered at Celebration this year that my previous nomination Cobb Sonbepol covered two separate characters, so here is half of that article extracted and written up under its proper name.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 18:53, May 15, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:55, May 22, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 21:25, May 23, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 04:53, May 26, 2019 (UTC)
  5. Zed42 (talk) 18:57, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "Kayn walked from toward the cantina's main bar into a booth". I'm guessing that Kayn was walking from somewhere near the main bar into the booth, but it took me a couple times reading it to get that. You might want to make it a little clearer that they were standing somewhere toward the main bar. Fan26 (Talk) 14:10, May 15, 2019 (UTC)
    • Does the wording make more sense now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:14, May 15, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Referencing stuff:
    • Reference 1 shouldn't be necessary, based on our decided approach toward "special references." The duck test effectively applies here: He looks like a Gotal, so he's a Gotal.
    • I'm assuming ref 4's Cobb mention is a copy-and-paste error? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:54, May 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • BTS:
    • Can we specify which of the Gotals respectively used the mask and claws? And can you explain why the use of double references is necessary in that sentence?
    • Maybe I'm just totally missing it, but how is "as props for the film It's Alive" being sourced to reference 5? I don't see this information anywhere in that article.
    • The BTS and the image caption are inconsistent on who actually created the mask. Is it Rick Baker, Laine Liska, or both? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:57, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:01, May 26, 2019 (UTC)