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Hat Lo

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:40, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It took years for me to finally figure out where Lo appears in the film since almost everything suggests that he's in the Outlander rather than the Jendirian Valley
  • Date Archived: 14:23, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 464 words (71 introduction, 234 body, 159 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. ACvote Nice work on incorporating both Encyclopedia editions! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:37, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:52, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 19:56, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 14:23, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • I don't know if that's how the English version of that Encyclopedia issue words it, but at least its French edition uses the word "concubine" for Ayy Vida, which has different implications compared to "consort," to the best of my knowledge.
    • Interesting, the English version does indeed just have consort. I've included both with a separate reference for the English edition since that's the latter version. I think this is the first instance I've seen of the French version having additional info compared to the English one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:56, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Vida's enslavement pretty much implies it, but the Encyclopedia issue outright says that she "became [Lo's] concubine against her will."
    • Covered this in the above sentence as well. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:56, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
  • If that's okay for you, could you please reword the BTS section about the subject's Legends background? The first sentence in particular sounds a bit difficult to understand to me, and the repetition of "published" disrupts the flow, in my opinion. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:10, 7 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:23, 15 August 2023 (UTC)