- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Hardcase
- Nominated by: JangFett (Talk) 02:33, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Continuation of The Deserter clone troopers
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Objections addressed via IRC. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 03:06, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:17, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
- -- 1358 (Talk) 17:56, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:03, May 26, 2010 (UTC)- Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:58, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:04, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Lee attacks
the Republic group spotted a crashed ship: Smuggler, Cis, Republic ?- Addressed
while he, Cody, and Crys stayed behind to go through the remains of the crashed ship: I don't thinks that only Cody, Crys and Kenobi stayed behind.- They did; they stayed behind to salvage the remains of the ship to find clues. They weren't part of Rex's team, too.
- I mean that not only Cody, Crys and Kenobi stayed behind. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:59, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Lee, in the episode Obi-Wan, Cody, and Crys were the only ones that stayed behind. I've said this before.
- Eh, no. There were a lot of troopers with Kenobi and Cody. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Again, I have no reason to change this, Lee. In the episode, those were the only ones mentioned that stayed behind. Anything else would be redundant, and not even worth mentioning. This article is about Hardcase, not the episode summary in general nor "Kenobi's group that stayed behind."
- Well it is not precise, but OK.
- Again, I have no reason to change this, Lee. In the episode, those were the only ones mentioned that stayed behind. Anything else would be redundant, and not even worth mentioning. This article is about Hardcase, not the episode summary in general nor "Kenobi's group that stayed behind."
- Eh, no. There were a lot of troopers with Kenobi and Cody. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Lee, in the episode Obi-Wan, Cody, and Crys were the only ones that stayed behind. I've said this before.
- I mean that not only Cody, Crys and Kenobi stayed behind. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:59, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
- They did; they stayed behind to salvage the remains of the ship to find clues. They weren't part of Rex's team, too.
The last paragraph is a little bit to much about Jesse.- Reworded a few things. Hardcase was with Jesse during that time.
- That's all from me. Nice to see more TCW (and especially) clones from you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 07:47, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
The Grand Master
"Following their arrival, Hardcase stayed with Kix…" He stayed where with Kix? Same thing in the bio. Where did he remain with Kix?- Overall, nice work, Jang. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:26, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
In the intro you mention Grievous's "crashed ship." Is this intended to be his jettisoned escape pod, or is this is crashed capital ship? I think clarifying would be appropriate.For reference No. 5, regarding the inch-to-centimeter conversion you do, why not just mention specifically what the source says? Is there even any evidence in canon for a true real-world metric conversion? I'm afraid this is bordering too much on OR-ishness.Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:28, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:04, May 29, 2010 (UTC)