Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Harbinger (Mon Calamari Star Cruiser)

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Harbinger (Mon Calamari Star Cruiser)

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 16:16, January 7, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Although there's another quote that mentions Harbinger, it doesn't fit in either the Description or C&C

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:54, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:10, February 6, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:55, February 7, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Looks magnificent! Manoof (talk) 01:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 14:59, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Object

SE
  • "Harbinger joined half of the fleet from Talaan as Bel Iblis answered" Can you reword this? It sounds like it only joined the Talaan fleet when Iblis answer the call.
    • Pow.
  • Can we get some context on the Smuggler's Alliance?
    • Pow
  • Can you specify earlier in the bio that the ambush was at Ebaq? You mention the Treskov system as the location of the ambush, then refer to it as the Battle of Ebaq. Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:18, January 9, 2015 (UTC)
    • Pow. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 16:41, January 9, 2015 (UTC)
  • Can you give a little more context on what a Yammosk is? Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:05, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • There. 501st dogma(talk) 17:32, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I would recommend not trying to say that the Harbinger was built by the Mon Calamari Shipyards. Rebel Alliance Sourcebook only pertains to a very specific point in the timeline of the Galactic Civil War (2 ABY, specifically). And since Harbinger doesn't show up until 28 ABY, it's entirely possible the ship was constructed years later by some other manufacturer.
    • Axed.
  • The infobox's fleet field should specify something. I'm assuming the New Republic and Galactic Alliance Navy articles apply here.
    • There.
  • Surely, the engine field should also specify "Equipped"? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:07, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
    • Added. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 20:23, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
  • With the removal of information, the intro is looking kind of skimpy now. I would like to see an expansion. Doesn't have to be major or anything. Maybe bring it to about the size of the first History paragraph. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:30, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:59, February 16, 2015 (UTC)