Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hantic

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Hantic

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Good work.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 15:10, November 28, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:15, December 13, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:23, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Gungans and politics. Sounds like a winner.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 01:38, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 15:13, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Menkooroo (talk) 06:51, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Return of the Jedi
Toprawa
  • Why is there no ending punctuation for the intro or Biography quotes?
  • Who is "they" here? This doesn't seem to be referring to anyone who has been introduced thus far in the article. "and if they would return it"
  • If the BTS is going to self-reference itself, then a reference for Clone Campaigns needs to accompany that portion of this sentence. You can't just stick the GB reference at the end of this, because that item does not cover all of this information: "Hantic appears in the 2001 PC video game Star Wars: Galactic Battlegrounds and its 2002 expansion. Hantic appeared in the second level of the Gungan campaign, "The Gungan who would be Boss."[1]"
  • I'm sort of confused at what this sentence in the BTS is alluding to. If he's not just a voice, as the strategy guide claims, then this sentence should clearly note that it's a mistake. "Prior to the game's release, the character was first mentioned in the game's strategy guide, which stated he was just a voice that the player hears when entering Otoh Langua." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:54, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
    • Adressed all. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:15, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
      • Nothing appears to have been done in regards to the second objection. And please remember to place reference notes after punctuation, which you did not correctly do in regards to the third objection. This is considered official site policy. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:19, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
Hantic
  • I made the same objection to Fred's Tenko nom: Can you mention in the BTS that in the game, he's depicted as a generic boss icon that also represents several other characters? Seems noteworthy.
  • In the intro: "Hantic told Gallo that he would join his cause if he found a way to restore Otoh Langua's wealth..." is a bit confusing, as "he" refers to two different people within the same sentence. Can you clear it up?
    • There's still "Hantic told Gallo that he would join his cause if he found a way" here, with "he" referring to two different people in close succession and a "his" thrown in too.
  • The intro and the bio begin with identical sentences. Gimme some variation!
  • Tenko's article indicates that Otoh Jahai's forces had been making attacks on Otoh Langua before Gallo showed up. Is this true? If so, I think the early part of the bio should mention what specifically was happening to Otoh Langua during the war rather than just giving a vague overview of the conflict.
    • Are there actual attacks, though? You added that there was a rivalry, but I want to confirm that the information from Tenko's article stating that there are attacks is correct. If so, they should be noted. Menkooroo (talk) 13:31, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
      • From what I can remember the game doesn't mention any attacks between Otoh Jahai and Otoh Jangua, but everyone would be attacking anyone anyway. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 23:44, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  • The article asserts that the war happened "around" 3,000 BBY, but ref note [2] states that the Atlas places it in 3,000 BBY. Which one is correct? Menkooroo (talk) 10:15, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  • One more: Do we know who voices him? You have a voice actor named for Antes Belladar, so I'm wondering if we know who does this guy. If not, can you mention that the voice actor wasn't credited? Menkooroo (talk) 01:11, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
    • See the comments section of Tenko's nom, this is the same case for the other Gungan bosses that are currently nommed. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 02:39, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
      • Pssst: See the second half of the objection --- if there's no voice actor credited, then it's worth noting as much. Menkooroo (talk) 04:19, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:04, December 23, 2012 (UTC)


I've always seen "boss" capitalized, even when not used with a name. That's how I've been using it in all my articles. Have you seen otherwise? MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 15:51, December 21, 2012 (UTC)