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Gyrocomputer
- Nominated by: AxMech (talk) 10:14, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 02:17, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 396 words (54 introduction, 278 body, 64 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 319 words (54 introduction, 265 body, 0 behind the scenes)
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Support
Lewisr (talk) 19:08, 12 December 2024 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 20:57, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:44, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 01:13, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
Object
ThrawnChiss
"Star Wars Canon" should be formatted as Star Wars canon.You need to include the publication date of Build the Falcon, and link to the individual issue. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 15:20, 8 November 2024 (UTC)- Fixed bothAxMech (talk) 21:57, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- You need a source for the publication of the magazine (you can use Template:BMFdates), and "canon" should be in lowercase. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 18:53, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
- There is precedent for the book/magazine itself to be the source for its publication. Fixed the "canon"AxMech (talk) 15:31, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, for Build the Falcon, precedent is to use the template. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 19:30, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for pointing that out, fixedAxMech (talk) 19:57, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
- The template provides for an "around" date, but in the prose you say it was published on that date. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 19:23, 21 November 2024 (UTC)
- The template provides for an "around" date, but in the prose you say it was published on that date. ThrawnChiss7
- Thanks for pointing that out, fixedAxMech (talk) 19:57, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, for Build the Falcon, precedent is to use the template. ThrawnChiss7
- There is precedent for the book/magazine itself to be the source for its publication. Fixed the "canon"AxMech (talk) 15:31, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
- You need a source for the publication of the magazine (you can use Template:BMFdates), and "canon" should be in lowercase. ThrawnChiss7
- Fixed bothAxMech (talk) 21:57, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
Lew
That they are used in YT-1300's specifically is intro exclusive so should be included in the historyLewisr (talk) 06:21, 7 December 2024 (UTC)Regarding the BTS, the number of the issue should be spelled out, context for BMF (that it's a magazine), and the publisher should be noted. See Ryle_Torsyn#Behind_the_scenes for exampleLewisr (talk) 06:21, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
spookly
Most devices SAs (like trans-binary deflector for one) use |structure= field to note its shape. Given this has an image/visual depiction, it should do the same for cube-like, and also have that tucked into the Description section so its not infobox-exclusive.—spookywillowwtalk 04:49, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:13, 30 December 2024 (UTC)