Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Guania

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Guania

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 09:23, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not even Luceno can keep track of all these Wookiees.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Good work. I remember enjoying this book a lot. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:00, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Completely per Jon. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:40, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Looks good. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:30, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:00, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 22:31, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • Rather minor, but could you cut down the background info in the first paragraph of the Bio? Although it is necessary background info for Guania, it's bit large considered it's not directly related to Guania.
    • Tightened it up a bit. I don't think I can remove any entire details, as the Jedi, the purge, and the clone troopers all come back into play later in the bio, but there was definitely some description on my part that was a bit extraneous. Hopefully it's better now. Let me know if there's anything else you'd like to see go.
  • In the intro, you refer to Tarfful as a general, but not in the Bio. Please fix this.
    • Added, baby!
  • Otherwise, nice job Menk. Let's keep the barn-burner going. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:19, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review! I loves me my Wookiees. Menkooroo 04:31, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • I thought it would be appropriate to insert a Palpatine pipelink in the mention of the Supreme Chancellor. Feel free to adjust the linking edits made there to your liking. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:00, May 13, 2011 (UTC)
    • What you did is good. Thanks for that, and for the copy-edit. Menkooroo 01:36, May 14, 2011 (UTC)