Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Grizzer (massiff)/Legends

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Grizzer (massiff)/Legends

• Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) 11:21, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CAN that needed extra context, then sectioning and became a GAN.
• Date Archived: 17:07, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 301 words (41 introduction, 229 body, 31 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject The Clone Wars

(1 ACs/1 Users/2 Total)

(Votes required: 2 AC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 1 user or 1 AC vote required to pass.)

Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:36, 30 March 2023 (UTC)
2. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:28, 14 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• It seems to me that the intro is written from the perspective of Hound rather than the subject of this article. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:57, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Done ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his) 11:04, 29 March 2023 (UTC)

CC-8

• Intro and body give inconsistent ranks for Hound
• BTS should mention the network the show aired on. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:30, 9 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• I modelled the article, the first sectioned pet afaik, after an individual as that's kinda how we treat em Manoof (he/him/his) 11:21, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
• Yes those are small one-sentence subsections, but there's quite a bit of precedent for these and I think it's reasonable splitting them as they are. Manoof (he/him/his) 11:21, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
• I'll take this nomination over. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 15:14, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Unable to devote the time I think this will need. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 22:58, 13 May 2023 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

1. 10 days unaddressed objection —spookywilloww^talk 17:35, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:16, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:07, 20 May 2023 (UTC)