Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gree (planet)

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Gree (planet)

  • Nominated by: Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:41, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First nomination from Project: Gree. Please feel free to rip apart and judge.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. There doesn't seem to be anything I can rip apart. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 06:04, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote --Eyrezer 03:47, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
  3. Grunny (Talk) 05:32, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cylka-talk- 10:23, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:11, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. I think it might be worthwhile to throw in a quick explanation of what Type II atmosphere was, and why it was comfortable for the Gree. Most readers aren't familiar with the differences in the atmosphere types. Cylka-talk- 00:07, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • I added a bit here to clarify who was annexing them. Please revise if I got this wrong: " when he negotiated the annexation of Asation into the Empire"
      • Nope, makes sense.
    • A brief description of this for context would be preferable: "they developed a unique form of technology"
      • I've added some context, but going into greater detail would require a much longer description. I plan to rewrite the Gree technology article in the near future at any rate.
    • I'm a bit confused by this, since the previous sentence lists the castes, and then you refer to "devices." Can you be more specific? " the Gree began focusing on the artistry of actually operating the devices" Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:23, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
      • The castes are listed to provide some background as to why the Operator caste became so powerful within Gree society (which I will be covering in greater detail in a rewrite of the Gree species article). However, I have added an explanation about the devices in the previous paragraph to deal with your request for more context on Gree technology. I'm trying to find a good balance between required info and deviating off on a tangent that is better contained in its own article. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
        • All looks good to me. Not sure why I added the "(planet)" bit into the cephalopod redlink. My bad. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:11, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:11, 9 March 2009 (UTC)


  • Is the infobox picture worth it? --Eyrezer 03:47, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
    • Unless the Star Wars Atlas can give me a better one :P Seriously, though, I think it is. It adds a little image to the article where none would exist, and I've been doing it on planet noms for a while now. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)