Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gorrm

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Gorrm

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 02:32, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Giant monkey man with an earring!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:48, October 1, 2009 (UTC)
2. --Eyrezer 09:33, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
3. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 21:59, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 10:10, November 12, 2009 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:48, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
6. Sorry for not realizing I had an objection there still for so long. Nayayen^(talk) 15:57, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Farl-suggestion:
   • As you are nominating several articles that link to Merchants' Guild, could you consider creating an article/stub for Merchant's Guild? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:49, September 11, 2009 (UTC)
     • Created. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 23:23, September 28, 2009 (UTC)
2. For starters, there is information which is cited as being from FotSE which is not from that source. Graestan^(Talk) 00:42, September 13, 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 23:23, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 20:47, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

1. The article is good but it is not sourced properly. He did not appear in Funeral for a Dark Lord therefore he cannot be listed as appearing in "The Golden Age of the Sith" if he did not appear in all the issues. The referencing should also be adjusted like this also. Nayayen^(talk) 20:49, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed.
   • One last thing, what is the relevance of the last sentence of the Bts? Do you mean to say that Gorrm got an entry himself or that he was mentioned in Kahorr's entry? Nayayen^(talk) 23:54, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. Absent-minded mistake. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 21:32, November 11, 2009 (UTC)
2. "Kahorr had Gorrm give the police the pertinent documents; by a Merchants' Guild decision, the Starbreaker 12 had indeed been granted to Kahorr." This isn't very clear. Did they give the police the documents, and then have the Starbreaker granted to Kahorr? Or were they showing the police the documents to prove that the Starbreaker had already been granted to Kahorr? Also, please watch your linking; there were several links missing. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 22:57, November 3, 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed,
3. happened upon the Sith Empire, which had been lost since the Hundred-Year Darkness Find a better word than lost. Empires don't become lost. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 07:56, November 6, 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:47, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Vote to strike Graestan's objections (AC only)

1. Unaddressed for a rather long time. All other sourcing issues appear to have been fixed. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:48, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
2. Appears to be fixed. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 19:28, November 13, 2009 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:47, November 18, 2009 (UTC)