Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ginntho

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Ginntho

• Nominated by: Sanathestarr (talk) 16:40, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: DE AGOSTINIIIIII
• Date Archived: 02:57, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 594 words (115 introduction, 276 body, 203 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 642 words (156 introduction, 279 body, 207 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 02:37, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:35, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 02:57, 16 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• "during[1] that year's[6] Battle of Utapau.[1]" – since the beginning of this sentence begins with "In 19 BBY," the reader already knows that we're talking about events from that year, so you don't need to mention "that year's" again.
  • fixed Sanathestarr (talk) 08:38, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
    • I wasn't really talking about referencing (though I do think the change you made wasn't wrong), I more meant that it's redundant to mention the phrase "that year's" in reference to the battle. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:07, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
      • oh my bad, misunderstood what you meant, removed it Sanathestarr (talk) 20:37, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
• Can you add a picture of one of them from ROTS? If you don't want it in the body because of your short sections it would at least be a more relevant BTS picture. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:06, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
  • done, unfortunately we never really get a good look at them so this is as good as it gets Sanathestarr (talk) 08:38, 6 August 2024 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• There's definitely room for a couple of images in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:08, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
  • added Sanathestarr (talk) 20:37, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
• Looking at whatlinkshere it seems that Star Wars: Build the Millennium Falcon 30 also mentions them. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:08, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
  • done Sanathestarr (talk) 20:37, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:57, 16 August 2024 (UTC)