Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gherant/Legends

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Gherant

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Support

  1. This nom was ordered by the Emperor himself. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:14, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 22:33, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Greyman Jan.png (Talk) 13:39, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
  4. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 05:02, 7 April 2008 (UTC)
  5. Graestan(Talk) 02:03, 16 April 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. I'm not entirely sure that "flabbergasted" is the right word to use in the last sentence of the P&T section.--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 06:49, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
    • "Hand-picked by then-Captain Firmus Piett to an assignment aboard Darth Vader's flagship, the Star Dreadnought Executor, by 3 ABY as a deck officer, Gherant was responsible for overseeing authorized access of the Super Star Destroyer's sensitive areas." – A bit ponderous; please break up.
      • Reworded, broken up.
    • Piett's command had been promoted to admiral?
      • Reworded
    • A lot of repetition between the intro and body. Change it up a bit.
      • I've gotten the instances that were pretty much verbatim repetition. If you could pick out a few things that you would like reworded specifically, I'll change them. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:24, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
    • Graestan(Talk) 23:27, 13 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  1. Dal Fiolli di Herdessa via Alvveridia:
    • The infobox image is quite poor in quality. Can a better one be placed there or taken from a screenshot?
    • The P&T seems to be an unnecessary subdivision. There isn't enough info on him, probably to warrant it. This info would best be served worked into the biography where those points may not seem to be fully extrapolated. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:11, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
      • Addressed the P&T. Anyone want to grab a better picture from the film? :) Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:13, 5 April 2008 (UTC)