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Gersolik
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:00, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: 992 words, be very careful :P
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- "in Cloud City on the gas giant" given Cloud City is floating, I don't think on is the best terminology here.
- Fixed.
- "where Galactic Republic fighters had tried and failed to defend themselves from the Empire" If the Empire exists by that point, I think it should be reworded to note that the Republic technically doesn't exist anymore.
- Fixed.
- "It was then that the doors to the dining room opened, and Gersolik tried to reach for the access panel to the room, only to be stopped by Sbazzle." Is this meant to be the bit where Han, Leia and co. run into Vader? There should be some context for this.
- I think that the intro is too short of detail (and a bit short for the word count). Stuff like Lando bringing the two chefs into a meeting, the theorizing of poisoning methods, and the stuff that happens in the final bio paragraph (besides her being furious) should be mentioned in there in my opinion. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:45, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
- Okay, I see what you're saying in terms of word count, but I disagree that the level of detail needs to be finer (at the end of the day I'm going over the WC anyway so it doesn't really matter though). JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:16, 19 June 2022 (UTC)