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Geriel

  • Nominated by: OLIOSTER (talk) 07:10, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Short and sickly.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Cough cough! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 19:42, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
  2. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 01:29, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
  3. NAYAYEN—it appears to be a frammistat 20:12, December 17, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:53, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grunny (talk) 02:21, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Assuming Tm's objection is handled. 1358 (Talk) 20:02, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
  7. Yup yup. –Tm_T (Talk) 16:41, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Fred strikes
  • Just one as far as I can tell. You might wanna rewrite either the intro or the beginning of the Bio. There are pretty much idenitical and it reads real weird. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 19:24, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
    • Yeah, this was from having to go from trying for CA to going to GA. Better now? OLIOSTER (talk) 19:35, December 2, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Does the source refer to this as an "unknown illness," or is this your own description? If it's the latter, this should be removed/reworded to avoid the "unknown" usage: "During this time he began suffering from an unknown illness." Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:40, December 31, 2010 (UTC)
mr. T
  • I'm quite sure it's possible to persuade the Quarren to leave more room for the refugees due to Geriel's illness, you might like to check that. –Tm_T (Talk) 14:20, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • I noted this in the BtS. Last sentence of the first paragraph. OLIOSTER (talk) 22:04, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
      • Bah, didn't notice it. This could be added into the bio inside the {{GameLSmechanics}} as I think it can be considered as part of "fully completes" thing in there. –Tm_T (Talk) 22:10, January 5, 2011 (UTC)
        • Still waiting on a follow up on this after a conversation in #KOTOR. OLIOSTER (talk) 09:56, January 10, 2011 (UTC)
          • Follow up: after giving this a good thought, let's leave it as is, clean and simple. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 16:41, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:54, January 13, 2011 (UTC)


  • Thanks to NaruHina for a pre-nom review. OLIOSTER (talk) 07:11, December 2, 2010 (UTC)