- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Gavar Khai's petty officer
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:59, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Last one of three.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
Good work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:10, April 13, 2012 (UTC)- Nice job.—Cal Jedi
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IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:55, May 21, 2012 (UTC)- —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 06:06, May 21, 2012 (UTC)
- 501st dogma(talk) 21:42, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:51, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Jujiggum
Could you give the approximate birth date in the intro?- Added. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Can you reword the "fight"/"fought" redundancy from the last sentence of the intro?- Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
IIRC, Operation Shieldfall's objective was to capture or kill Abeloth.- Adressed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Why do you say that the Sabers ambushed the Jedi group, and then go back and say that they found the Jedi group?- Fixed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Grammar in the first sentence of the P&T.- Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Check out the tweak I made here. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:10, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
A bit of context on why/how using the Force on Nam Chorios had catastrophic consequences would be good- I hope the addition is fine. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
In the BTS, why don't you call him "The petty officer," or even "Gavar Khai's petty officer"? (The latter is a conjectural title, but it's also a completely canon, non-conjectural fact, so it can be used there.) There were lots of Sabers in the article, so saying "The Sith Saber" is less precise.- Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
- That's it from me. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 12:27, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Jangeth
Reload your infobox. More to come. JangFett (Talk) 16:03, April 13, 2012 (UTC)- Done. Bring' em on. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:27, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
I'm not sure where you get the information that he was born around 20 ABY. Wouldn't several years older be some between 22 and 24 ABY? It might be a good idea to say before 27.5 ABY.- Good idea, fixed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:12, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
I would mention somewhere that he had a lightsaber.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:28, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
- Done, thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:12, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:24, June 1, 2012 (UTC)