- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Contents
Garouk
- Nominated by: SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 02:01, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: WP:KOTOR.
(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:08, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
- NAYAYEN:TALK 12:55, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
- —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:46, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
Cylka-talk- 02:31, August 27, 2010 (UTC)- -- 1358 (Talk) 12:06, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:40, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
Grunny (talk) 06:01, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Xd1358
You kinda overuse "he" in the first paragraph of the body. Please vary.- Better, hopefully. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:22, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Otherwise, it's clean. Nice read. :) -- 1358 (Talk) 18:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 08:22, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:01, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Doesn't affect my vote for the article but could you possibly find a page and volume number for the CSWE entry as well? NAYAYEN:TALK 12:55, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
- I wouldn't mind putting it in, but I don't see many other GA/FAs using page numbers and volumes for the CSWE, nor for any other source. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 00:10, August 23, 2010 (UTC)