Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gargachykk

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Gargachykk

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 18:43, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Got any more barns left to burn?

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Plenty. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:54, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Menkooroo 12:15, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote—Tommy 9281 Tuesday, May 31, 2011, 23:24 UTC
  4. One day he'll get those Smurfs! ~SavageBOB sig 15:30, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:11, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 02:57, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone
  • "throwing himself onto Darth Maul as soon as the latter activated his lightsaber": could you give a little more context here? The way this is worded, it sounds like Garga is loyal (because he's protecting Daranda's life) but foolhardy (since he's recklessly "throwing himself" onto Maul), and I'm not sure if these implications are right—if my memory serves right, Garga simply attacked Maul from behind. Saying that instead might be more clear. CC7567 (talk) 21:37, May 21, 2011 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged…
  • Judging by the infobox image, there are a few more details about his physical appearance that can be added to P&T: his black eyes, his braided beard, and his black skin (based on his exposed nose). The black skin should be added to the infobox as well.
    • His braided beard was already mentioned, but I've added the part about his eyes. I'm not sure about the nose, though. Is nose color=skin color? I mean we don't know what's under all that fur (wow that sounds wrong), maybe it's somehow different. And if we were to assume that a Wookiee's nose is the same color as the rest of his skin is, that would mean that Hronk's skin color is blue.
      • Well, my thinking is that the "Skin" field doesn't necessarily have to pertain to the primary skin color, and could mention "black nose" or something. But, then again, we don't list "pink lips" in Leia's infobox, so that's cool if you want to leave it out.
  • Without seeing the comic, I'm not sure, but "severed remains" sounds odd-- do we see only limbs or something? Would "dismembered remains" be better? ~SavageBOB sig 21:13, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
    • As a note, that last one was my fault; bad word choice in my copy-edit. I'm fine with whatever is chosen to replace it. CC7567 (talk) 03:17, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:57, June 2, 2011 (UTC)