Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gana Lavin's father

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  • 1 Gana Lavin's father
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 The Kiljis' father
        • 1.1.2.2 Anil
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Gana Lavin's father

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 15:35, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 20:47, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 335 words (53 introduction, 176 body, 106 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 23:51, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Where's the redirect for Daddy? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:03, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:18, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. Lewisr (talk) 23:26, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
  5. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:39, 18 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

The Kiljis' father
  • Intro: I'd identify Lavian as a Human woman when you first mention her, not after.
  • I think pipelinking "thug" to gangster is appropriate, thoughts? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 15:23, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Both done. OOM 224 (he/him) 18:08, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 01:48, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • I think clarifying that Revan is the player character would be beneficial.
  • Can Gana Lavin's gender be sourced to the game itself? Just want to make sure it's not assumed based on Lavin's appearance.
  • Does the player's choice really affect the 100% game completion? If not, {{Tl|Gamedecision}} might be more fitting. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:28, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
    • On second thought, based on the template's current position, I assume the encounter is fully optional. If that's the case, {{Gamemechanics}} would actually be appropriate, but I'd like to see that clarified in BTS. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:08, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
      • Thanks, all addressed OOM 224 (he/him) 16:37, 18 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • I've additionally done a copy-edit and intend to take over the nomination. OOM 224 (he/him) 18:08, 10 May 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:47, 18 May 2023 (UTC)