Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Galney (Ducha of Terephon)

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Galney (Ducha of Terephon)

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(And now, young Skywalker, you will die.)} 23:41, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: It was a dark and stormy night. The Dolphins had just lost, and William Shatner's rendition of Rocket Man was stuck in my head. So I thought "I'll GA a conniving Hapan lady. That should cheer me up." The rest is history.

(3 AC/2 users/5 total)

Support

1. Who beat the Dolphins? The Ravens? Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 19:45, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
2. Anakin Skywalker, Juhani, Goran Beviin HAHAHAHAHA! NaruHina ^Talk [[File:Anlink titleakinsolo.png|14px]] 21:12, 28 October 2008 (UTC) PPS:The Phillys WON!
3. DC 02:37, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 09:46, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
5. This was such a great story. I loved every minute of it.—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 22:15, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From NaruHina's Homework Stuffed Death Note:
   • This is minor, I fixed the grammer and flow errors I noticed, but in the "Incident at the Villa Solis" section, I think the "know" is supposed to be italicized in the quote, not "I" NaruHina ^Talk 13:27, 28 October 2008 (UTC) PS:You jinxed me! Shater's Rocket Man came on the radio as I was reviewing this >:P
     • No, the quote is correct. IFYLOFD ^{(And now, young Skywalker, you will die.)} 19:29, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
       • Oh, OK, it sounds weird though. But then again the whole series is. NaruHina ^Talk 21:12, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
2. DC
   • Why did Galney want to kill Jaina and Zekk?
     • Addressed.
   • "Ducha Galney was a very plotting and calculating woman." Does Tempest actually state that?
     • Addressed.
   • Mention Lady Galney and her actions in the bio and intro.
     • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(And now, young Skywalker, you will die.)} 02:31, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
     • Not bad. DC 02:20, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
3. The Anvil:
   • Some mention of the Consortium's relation to the Galactic Alliance needs to be made in the infobox.
     • Addressed.
   • Galney unknowiwingly gave inside information to a consort in league with the Heritage Council. A consort? Was it not her consort?
     • Addressed.
   • Also is there no article for the consort? I think there should be, as he did get a notable enough mention to warrant a stub at least, IMO.
     • I don't think there is an article for said consort.
       • Okay, care to create one?
   • That same sentence. Which Galney? There are ways of differentiating them without constantly using their name.
     • Addressed.
   • For quote formatting, a two-individual, single-line each exchange should be formatted as: {{Quote}} , with line breaks.
     • Addressed.
   • No quote for the Battle of Hapes section?
     • Addressed.
   • Things that have their own articles need to be linked once in the intro, and once in the body at first mention of the subject.
     • Addressed.
   • What type of Star Destroyer was the Anakin Solo?
     • Addressed.
   • The whole P&T could use some reworking. Talk about her participation in a coup and against whom in one fell-swoop. The section can also be expanded, as the Ducha displayed many more personality traits than being just conniving and loving. —Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 10:22, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
     • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(And now, young Skywalker, you will die.)} 20:15, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• I must say, that the opening quote is absolutely astral.—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 22:15, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:39, 1 November 2008 (UTC)