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Gabrial Atanna
- Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 09:15, April 21, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: WEG goodness.
(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
- 501st dogma(talk) 21:06, April 22, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:12, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:04, May 2, 2013 (UTC)- —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:21, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
- These roleplaying articles are indeed goodness.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 17:29, May 18, 2013 (UTC)
JangFett (Talk) 22:48, May 23, 2013 (UTC)
Awesome possum. MasterFred(Whatever) 15:54, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
Object
501st
Is there no mention as to whether he is rescued or not?- No. The main focus is the rescue of his wife and grandchildren. It only says a team is going to attempt his rescue.
You mention the Darpa sector briefly in the BTS. You should say that Esseles was in the Darpa sector, to tie the Senator to the Darpa sector more.501st dogma(talk) 23:48, April 21, 2013 (UTC)- Added. - Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 08:51, April 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Added. - Sir Cavalier of One
From Frd's Shd
The paragraph between the roleplaying banners uses "Atanna" too much, in my opinion. Maybe try some slight rewording to remove some of those instances. MasterFred(Whatever) 22:51, May 23, 2013 (UTC)
- I changed a couple up. See if that's any better. - Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 08:38, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
- I changed a couple up. See if that's any better. - Sir Cavalier of One
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:54, May 29, 2013 (UTC)