Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gabrial Atanna

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Gabrial Atanna

• Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:15, April 21, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WEG goodness.

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:06, April 22, 2013 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:12, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:04, May 2, 2013 (UTC)
4. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:21, May 13, 2013 (UTC)
5. These roleplaying articles are indeed goodness.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:29, May 18, 2013 (UTC)
6. JangFett ^(Talk) 22:48, May 23, 2013 (UTC)
7. Awesome possum. MasterFred^(Whatever) 15:54, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501st

• Is there no mention as to whether he is rescued or not?
  • No. The main focus is the rescue of his wife and grandchildren. It only says a team is going to attempt his rescue.
• You mention the Darpa sector briefly in the BTS. You should say that Esseles was in the Darpa sector, to tie the Senator to the Darpa sector more. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:48, April 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:51, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

From Frd's Shd

• The paragraph between the roleplaying banners uses "Atanna" too much, in my opinion. Maybe try some slight rewording to remove some of those instances. MasterFred^(Whatever) 22:51, May 23, 2013 (UTC)
  • I changed a couple up. See if that's any better. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:38, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:54, May 29, 2013 (UTC)