Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gaartatha

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Gaartatha

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 13:05, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A West End Games barn-burner contribution.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 00:11, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Hooray! Menkooroo 12:36, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ~SavageBOB sig 06:06, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:04, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Wow, I forgot I even reviewed this. :P Forgive my, Eyrezer. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 16:17, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • Couldn't you put Alliance to Restore the Republic in the affiliation field of the infobox since Gaartatha was allied with Nhaa? Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:22, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
    • I considered this, but I think the evidence is too scanty to make this claim. Not everyone that came into conflict with the Empire was a member of the Alliance, and Gaartatha's relationship with Nhaa doesn't go this far. --Eyrezer 00:00, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
      • OK, fair enough.
Fred strikes
  • The first three sentences of the second paragraph of the P&T don't seem to refer much to personalities or traits. Could you please reword so that it doesn't just sound like a rewording of the bio?
    • The info in those sentences is not found in the Bio. While the bio mentions his occupation -- pilot -- the particular aptitudes are all specified in the original source. Likewise, the unarmed combat skill are not otherwise mentioned in the bio. There is also plenty of precedent for including details of appearance, etc in the P&T. See Santhou Lazith'chika, Rayc Ryjerd, Yuln and Busurra (the last one of my prior articles) for P&T that have parts corresponding the Gaartatha's. --Eyrezer 11:08, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
  • That's all for now. Good job so far. :) MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 17:26, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
Down in flames
  • A little nitpicky, but simply calling it "the West End Games roleplaying game" doesn't make it clear that you're talking about the Star Wars roleplaying game. Menkooroo 09:41, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
    • Lol, we are on the Star Wars wiki, and the book is the Star Wars Gamemaster Handbook, but I have made this connection explicit. --Eyrezer 10:04, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged…
  • Can you break up the explanation of his name so that we know which part means what? ~SavageBOB sig 05:00, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
    • We have a rule on the Oxford comma? Done. --Eyrezer 05:59, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
      • ! Maybe not. In my experience, it's standard American usage, but I suppose you can revert if you prefer. :) ~SavageBOB sig 06:06, May 14, 2011 (UTC)
        • I'm not American! :P --Eyrezer 06:09, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:41, May 18, 2011 (UTC)