Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Frank (gladiator)

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Frank (gladiator)

• Nominated by: —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:46, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Franky boy was a CA, but he got too big to handle it. For WP:VG.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:04, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
2. I can't go down like that! I am Frank, Nym's cousin.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:38, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:23, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:03, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:33, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi

• In the introduction, the second sentence is too long and the last sentence is too short. I would put some of the information from the second sentence into the last one.
  • Changed around. Check it out.
• I would put at little more context on Nym in the biography section, just saying he is a pirate doesn't really give the whole picture.
  • I figured "pirate" would explain what would need to be told about him, but see what you think.
• From the picture it looks like Frank is wearing some kind of armor, if you think this is noteworthy enough please add it to the article.
  • Added.
• "Nym was designed for The Force Unleashed II after he was found in concept art archives of characters that never made it into a game." This doesn't make sense to me, because Nym did make it into video games. Did you mean to say "Frank was designed..."?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:56, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
  • Heh. Error due to my lack of sleep. Thanks for the review.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 04:12, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lee's charge

• He was the cousin of Nym, a Feeoring pirate who was sympathetic to the Alliance to Restore the Republic during the Great Galactic War.: I'm not 100 percent sure, but is "Feeoring" an error?
  • Heh. Yeah, changed.
• Maybe you could mention his wounds as a physical description in the P&T.
  • Swip-swapped.
• Good job. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:32, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:02, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Toprawa

• The BTS should spell out literally that the character was first identified by name in the art book. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:16, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:26, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:33, March 26, 2012 (UTC)