Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/First duel in Kesla Vein

< Wookieepedia:Good article nominations
The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

First duel in Kesla Vein

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:25, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first article about a battle or skirmish. Thanks a lot to Jonjedigrandmaster for the pre-nom review. If anything is not OK blame it on Menkooroo. It was his idea.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:01, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
  2. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 23:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Menkooroo 18:34, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Good work.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 00:51, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Plagueis327 04:43, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Jujiggum
  • Just one more thing (sorry I missed this earlier): a brief mention of the petty officer's use of the Force to try and throw rocks at Vestara, and the inevitable consequence of a Force storm somewhere on the planet, should be mentioned. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
    • No problem, I've added a brief mention in the "Aftermath" section. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
Duels
  • Just one: The intro states "The Jedi killed all of the Sith except Annax," but Vestara (not a Jedi) actually kills one. Maybe you could expand this a little bit and mention that there were three one-on-one duels? Since the fight itself is the subject of the article, this kind of detail on the fight wouldn't be amiss. Menkooroo 03:58, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:36, May 16, 2012 (UTC)