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First battle of the Seswenna sector
- Nominated by: Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 02:53, August 9, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Big prelude for a minor engagement
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 12:24, August 12, 2013 (UTC)- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 00:21, August 14, 2013 (UTC) - Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 12:16, August 15, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:45, August 17, 2013 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:39, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Alrighty. Winterz (talk) 11:57, September 10, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Just a little thing
In the intro, "(...) continued their domination of the Rimma Trade Route until later that year, when the Republic Navy regrouped in the Seswenna sector and launched a second offensive", annd then what? You should probably complete the assessment.Winterz (talk) 16:09, September 7, 2013 (UTC)- I'm iffy on this. The intro is supposed to summarize this article and act as a bit of a teaser for the rest of the body. The outcome of the following battle is only distantly related to the basic information regarding this event, so including that in the intro strikes me as inappropriate and unnecessary (it also subtly encourages readers to finish this article and pursue information on the next). Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 04:56, September 10, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:33, September 10, 2013 (UTC)